Entry #3 fresh and flavorful
Have you ever consumed something that made your mouth feel Suddenly fresh and somewhat cool and a flavor so strong that it clears your nose well let me tell you about my experience. Let’s say I did a little experiment that involves a blindfold and a various amount of little snacks that would leave your breath brand new. The goal was to describe the feeling and the experience of an unknown treat while I blindfolded that my partner picked at random. My partner in my experiment handed me a container to open as he placed it in my hand. I shook the container. It seemed like it was a box of Skittles, then I proceeded to open the box as I reached into it. It seemed like it was something round with a hole in the middle.The next thing I do is smell it, it smelled crisp and rich as I popped it in my mouth and the taste hit my tongue. The flavor was powerful, so powerful that when I exhaled I felt the coolness through my nose if that makes sense it felt like it cleared up my nose. I also have a burst of energy. If I had to describe the overall experience I would say sudden, fresh, overwhelming, flavorful, and exhilarating.
I liked reading how you feel when eating something minty! Yet, I did not feel like you had the best description in the show and not telling of eating a single mint. You said what you felt, but I did not feel what you had felt. They story leading up is inspiring and interesting, but you quickly ended you explaining of the single moment of eating a mint like candy.
ReplyDeleteThank you for your feedback Skylar !!
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